Today I welcome
my friend and fellow author, J. L. Greger to tell you about her inspiration for
her new book, The Good
Old Days? A Collection of Stories. I had the
privilege of editing this one, and I loved her tales.
Intertwining
Facts, Memories, and Imagination to Create Fiction
After I read several nauseatingly glowing accounts of the “good
old days,” I asked friends about their memories of their childhoods and teen
years. Then I began to write short stories and published
fourteen of them in The Good Old Days? A Collection of Stories.
Memories
need to be supplemented with facts. Although I
took copious notes as friends spoke of their past, key details, necessary to
make the tales believable, were missing or garbled. I found these details were
“hooks” to readers. For example, in the story, “Dirty Dave,” I mentioned the
nested Pyrex mixing bowls in yellow, green, red, and blue. Several readers
noted I’d gotten the sizes right. The yellow bowl was the largest; the green
was the next size. I was glad I had researched the subject. (By the way, these
vintage sets often sell for over $100 on eBay. I’ve seen them sell for more at
antique shows in New England.)
Memoires
help to create a mood. I wrote my stories in
the idiosyncratic way of memoirs. Although my vignettes are fiction, the
auras of my friends, but not their physical characteristics, are infused into
my characters. Thus, some of the characters are playful, and others are cynical
or grouchy. I modified the tenor of the stories by telling some of them from
the point of view of a child and others from the perspective of an adult. A
five-year-old’s view of department stores in the 1950s (e.g. The elevator
operator wore gloves. Everything was fastidiously arranged by color in the
Notions Department.) in “Questions” is funnier than an adult’s observations.
Memories are
snapshots of history. My stories are snapshots of major
historical events and societal problems during the 1940s, 1950s, and 1960s. Nostalgia
is fine, but honesty about the past is important. One aspect of several of
these vignettes—child abuse in so-called “nice” homes—is not funny. I hope these
tales will encourage older readers to remember the past honestly and will let
younger readers realize most social problems aren’t new.
Here’s the start of
one tale. “How Old Is the Earth?” in The Good Old Days? A Collection of Stories.
This story is based on reminiscences of a friend. He
mentioned the Golden Book Encyclopedia, but couldn’t remember any particulars,
as he told me about the limitations of his grade-school education. My research
supplied all the details about this hot promotional item for A&P Stores in
1959 and 1960. The geological facts are also correct. However, the George in
the story is fictional. My friend doesn’t look like George, isn’t a professor,
and has never enjoyed a Friday afternoon on the patio of the Wisconsin Student
Union. He does like a beer occasionally.
I hope you enjoy
this intertwining of facts and memories in fiction.
How Old Is
the Earth?
“You’re a scientist. How old is the earth?” My friend, an
art professor, looked around the rather raucous crowd on the patio at the
University of Wisconsin Student Union on a late summer afternoon. When he waved
his tanned arm, I noticed thin, white scars crossed the back of his hand. “What
do you think these students would say?”
“First off, I’m no geologist. I don’t know the current
scientific estimate, probably several billion years.” I nodded at the students
as I sipped my beer. “I doubt any of them could give you a better answer, even
if they were sober.”
George pulled his hands through his longish gray hair and
then stroked his much darker short beard. “Four and a half-billion years. The
most painful and maybe most important fact I ever learned.”
I blinked. “Really? Somewhere in grade school, I accepted
the earth had a long history, but I was never fascinated by paleontology or
geology.”
“You’re not from a religious home.”
I frowned. “We went to church most Sundays.”
“I mean a home steeped in strict interpretations of the
Bible.” He leaned back in his yellow, sunburst metal chair and chewed a handful
of popcorn. “Did you know church leaders calculated the earth to be six
thousand years old on the basis of the book of Genesis?”
I threw a couple of kernels to nearby birds. “You must
really like the Discovery Channel and PBS nature specials. What got us on this
line of conversation? I expected you to be reliving your years as a professor
of photography this afternoon, one week before your official retirement.”
George took a long swig of his beer. “Today would have been
Mum’s birthday. Made me think of the day I was most proud of her. She was your
typical stay-at-home mother of the fifties. Well, except Pop was afraid other
men would notice her. So, she wore her long dishwater blonde hair in braids
wrapped around her head. She looked like a Norwegian immigrant just off the boat
in the old daguerreotypes. Didn’t matter to us boys. We thought Mum was
pretty.”
He gazed out over the lake for so long I interrupted his
thoughts. “What did your mother do on this special day?”
“Be patient. I was remembering how it all began. Do you
remember when A&P offered the Golden Book Encyclopedias as a sales
incentive in fifty-nine and maybe sixty?”
I pushed my green starburst metal chair back. “Vaguely. I
can’t remember the deal exactly. Let’s see...if you bought twenty dollars of
groceries, you could purchase one of the volumes in the Golden Book
Encyclopedia for an additional dollar or two. Every month, they offered another
volume. I think there were…fifteen or sixteen volumes all together.”
George smiled. “Yeah, they had shiny covers in bright colors,
not like the standard encyclopedias, World Book and Britannica, with their fake
leather covers and gilt-edged pages. Okay, I’m ready to tell my story.”
For the rest of the story,
read The
Good Old Days? A Collection of Stories. Available at Amazon (paperback
and Kindle): http://amzn.com/1537743813
J. L. Greger usually writes mysteries and thrillers with
"sound bites" of science and travel: Murder… A Way to Lose Weight
(winner of 2016 Public Safety Writers Assoc. [PSWA] annual contest and finalist
for New Mexico/Arizona Book Awards) I Saw You in Beirut, Malignancy (winner of 2015 PSWA
contest) Coming Flu, and Ignore the Pain.
Website: http://www:jlgreger.com
Amazon author page:
https://www.amazon.com/-/e/B008IFZSC4
Thanks for hosting me. I hope this blog inspires others to try writing a short story. They'r more fun than novels because you can experiment more.
ReplyDeleteLarry agrees with you. His short story collection, "Lakeview Park," took several years, but we both still love the stories.
DeleteI really liked the way this blog post was organized, writing tips, and an example. I am sharing with my writing group!
ReplyDeleteJanet is a terrific writer.
DeleteI'm a fan of the book and enjoyed reading more of the author's thoughts here. Details like the bowls and starburst metal chair brought memories flooding back, for me. And the overall message of the collection is valuable to every generation.
ReplyDeleteShe has more short stories to come. And they are good, too.
DeleteWow.
ReplyDeleteJudy, I'm an old prof so I organize my blogs to be teaching tools or at least slightly useful. I'm glad you like my approach to blogs.
Nancy & Lorna, Thanks for the kinds words. I really believe that details (like nested pyrex mixing bowls) are one of things what make fiction seem real.
Janet
You can win a free copy of The Good Old Days? A Collection of Stories from a GoodReads Giveaway, if you enter before Oct 30: http://tinyurl.com/jp2jjdq
ReplyDeleteNice introduction to your collection, Janet. Memories are made stronger by facts.
ReplyDeleteShe has more, and I hope we'll see them soon!
DeleteThanks John.
ReplyDeleteIn a couple of cases, I found the memories weren't quite the same as the facts. I guess I'm not the only one with an aging memory.
Janet